Could you tell me the grammar error in the text bellow?
Wednesday, April 7th, 2010 at
1:21 am
Hello!
How are you?I`m writing because I saw the new photos. I thought those photos were in a village in Germany. The photos are very beautiful.
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The problem isn’t exactly grammatical, it’s more to do with intention.
The way this is written it sounds as though you THOUGHT the photos were in a village in Germany but , in fact, they weren’t.
Here’s a rewrite:
Hello! How are you? I am writing because I saw the new photos of the German village and think they are very beautiful.
However, if you DID mean to imply that you were mistaken as to the location of the photos, then here’s a rewrite for that:
Hello! How are you? I’m writing because I saw the new photos which I thought were still in a village in Germany! They are very beautiful.
No, I’ve never heard a text BELLOW…
i agree with Jane B.