Comments on: Could you tell me the grammar error in the text bellow? http://www.grammarchecksoftware.com/could-you-tell-me-the-grammar-error-in-the-text-bellow The Best English Grammar Checking Program Review Thu, 05 Aug 2010 13:16:40 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: JaneB http://www.grammarchecksoftware.com/could-you-tell-me-the-grammar-error-in-the-text-bellow/comment-page-1#comment-1120 JaneB Wed, 07 Apr 2010 06:21:33 +0000 #comment-1120 The problem isn't exactly grammatical, it's more to do with intention. The way this is written it sounds as though you THOUGHT the photos were in a village in Germany but , in fact, they weren't. Here's a rewrite: Hello! How are you? I am writing because I saw the new photos of the German village and think they are very beautiful. However, if you DID mean to imply that you were mistaken as to the location of the photos, then here's a rewrite for that: Hello! How are you? I'm writing because I saw the new photos which I thought were still in a village in Germany! They are very beautiful. The problem isn’t exactly grammatical, it’s more to do with intention.
The way this is written it sounds as though you THOUGHT the photos were in a village in Germany but , in fact, they weren’t.

Here’s a rewrite:
Hello! How are you? I am writing because I saw the new photos of the German village and think they are very beautiful.

However, if you DID mean to imply that you were mistaken as to the location of the photos, then here’s a rewrite for that:

Hello! How are you? I’m writing because I saw the new photos which I thought were still in a village in Germany! They are very beautiful.

]]> By: captbullshot http://www.grammarchecksoftware.com/could-you-tell-me-the-grammar-error-in-the-text-bellow/comment-page-1#comment-1121 captbullshot Wed, 07 Apr 2010 06:21:33 +0000 #comment-1121 No, I've never heard a text BELLOW... No, I’ve never heard a text BELLOW…

]]> By: pghlpstck http://www.grammarchecksoftware.com/could-you-tell-me-the-grammar-error-in-the-text-bellow/comment-page-1#comment-1122 pghlpstck Wed, 07 Apr 2010 06:21:33 +0000 #comment-1122 i agree with Jane B. i agree with Jane B.

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