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Though money should not determine one’s success, it can determine how successful one feels. Personally, it would take more than a few thousand dollars to make me feel victorious in life. With a four year bachelor’s degree and a steady job, it would take an annual paycheck of at least ,000 to make me feel completely successful. I know that sounds very materialistic, but you won’t find an honest person who will say they feel successful without any money. Ultimately, the level of my education and current job would determine the amount of money it would take to make me feel successful.


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